What adults can learn from kids
-Adora Svitak
'What adults can learn from kids' When I first saw this title I was really interested because many people thinks that kids need to learn from adults. What does this means? I can not understand and it was quite very unique to me. What can adults learn from us.... I thought really hardly about it and I thought that creativity, or purity are one of the good ability that children have. I think Adora Svitak is very unique girl that I never haven't seen in my life. She is a brilliant girl. How can I write books when I'm in ages of 6? It is kind of hard job. I think this is why she is famous and she is admired by many people.
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I hope many adults can recognize that there are something that adults have to learn from childrens.
-Thnak you for reading my article.
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ReplyDeleteIn your essay you write: "How I can I write books when I'm in ages of 6? It is kind of impossible." Wouldn't Adora Svitak say that this kind of thinking is a "grown-up" way of thinking?
Yes. I was just saying it can be some hard job in that young ages. I know that it is grown up way. Thank you for checking my mistakes and giving some comments. Have a good day!
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